楚辞比唐诗更老、更野，结构也完全不一样——长句被”兮”切开，祭祀节拍、河神、招魂、问天，骨子里是一种巫祝的东西。AI 写楚辞最常见的翻车方式，是每隔一句插一个”兮”就当成楚辞了，既没有巫祭的感觉，也没有放逐者的火气。下面这 10 个 prompt 各自钉死一个楚辞篇章，把长句节拍写清楚，并把那些会把楚辞写成壁纸的常见词列入禁用区。
这类歌词的结构是怎样的
楚辞感歌词的骨架更像一段仪式，而不是流行的主副歌：
- 起呼 —— 第一人称喊出神名、自己的名字或一个地点
- 长段 1 —— 描述景（江、山、天）和一处伤口
- 带”兮”的重句 —— 一句反复的呼吸句
- 长段 2 —— 景在变，人也在动
- 带”兮”的重句 —— 改一两个字
- 问天桥段 —— 直接质问宇宙（为什么、谁、还要多久）
- 长段 3 —— 一个决定（走、留、死、等）
- 末重句 —— 节拍被打断，不收尾
更像招魂或祭歌，不是流行单曲。要在 prompt 里写清楚。
一个好 Prompt 通常包含什么
- 主题：不是”楚辞”，而是”屈原第二次被放逐后走在沼泽边”
- 结构：上面八段全列；写明哪几句要带”兮”
- 重句钩子：1 个神性意象 + 1 个祭仪动作（洒、跪、招、纺）
- 禁用短语：祖灵微笑、命中注定、千年诅咒、亡魂归处、永世不得超生
- 押韵：楚辞韵脚很松，挑一个尾音让它飘
- 情绪：放逐之怒、招魂之急、问天之诘、河神之恋
- 长度：长句，8–14 字；每个长段 4 句，每个重句 1 句
10 个可直接复制的 Prompt 模板
1. 离骚之放逐
使用场景: 历史史诗 OST、流放题材独唱
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics in modern Chinese, channeling Qu Yuan in the spirit of Lisao after his second banishment from court.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: an exiled minister walks the marsh edge, names the herbs he can no longer offer at court, refuses to stop calling himself loyal.
Refrain rule: 1 herb-or-river image + 1 ritual action (gather, scatter, hold to the sky).
Forbidden phrases: "命中注定", "祖灵哭泣", "尘世束缚".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ang.
Mood: bitter, lucid, refuses self-pity.
Length: 8–12 characters per line, 4 lines per long verse.2. 九歌祭神
使用场景: 祭祀场面配乐、仪式专辑曲
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics in the spirit of Jiu Ge (Nine Songs), as a shaman summons a god to descend at a riverside altar.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a shaman lays out offerings at dusk, names the god by an honorary title, asks the wind to carry the call upstream.
Refrain rule: 1 altar image (incense, jade, silk, drum) + 1 ritual action (kneel, pour, raise, chant).
Forbidden phrases: "邪灵", "魔障", "驱邪", "亡魂作祟".
Rhyme: end refrains in -i or -ei.
Mood: urgent but disciplined, awe without fear.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.3. 河伯遇舟
使用场景: 江河神话动画、水主题独立单曲
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics about a river spirit (河伯, He Bo) speaking to a passing boat at twilight.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: the spirit of the river introduces itself by the names of three tributaries, asks the boatman what he carries and why.
Refrain rule: 1 water image (current, foam, reed, fish) + 1 small action (turn the prow, lean over, drop a coin).
Forbidden phrases: "黑暗魂魄", "溺亡之咒", "深渊吞噬".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ou or -iu.
Mood: ancient, curious, neither hostile nor friendly.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.4. 湘君湘夫人
使用场景: 女神言情 OST、古典舞配乐
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics channeling the Xiang River goddess (湘君 or 湘夫人) waiting for a lover who does not arrive.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a goddess prepares a boat with orchids and cassia, waits a season, decides whether to keep waiting.
Refrain rule: 1 flower-or-boat image (orchid, cassia, painted prow) + 1 waiting action (smooth silk, retie sash, scatter petals).
Forbidden phrases: "三生石", "今生唯一", "心心相印".
Rhyme: end refrains in -an.
Mood: patient, tender, slowly turning cold.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.5. 天问
使用场景: 历史科幻混搭配乐、哲学概念专辑
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics in the spirit of Tian Wen (Questions to Heaven), as a single speaker addresses the cosmos with one question after another.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a speaker stands under the night sky and asks who shaped the world, who lit the stars, why the just suffer.
Refrain rule: 1 cosmic image (star, vault, axle, dawn) + 1 questioning action (point, lift hands, write in dust).
Forbidden phrases: "众神缄默", "再无回响", "孑然一身".
Rhyme: end refrains in -uo or -o.
Mood: relentless, curious, refuses to stop asking.
Length: 10–14 characters per line, often phrased as a question.6. 少司命定数
使用场景: 神话剧主题、命运题材独唱
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics channeling Shao Si Ming (the Lesser Master of Fate), the deity who measures the lives of children.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: the deity walks among mortals, counts a child's breaths, decides whether to lengthen the thread one more season.
Refrain rule: 1 thread-or-measure image (silk, knot, scale, lamp) + 1 weighing action (lift, cut, tie, blow out).
Forbidden phrases: "命运残忍", "天意已写", "无路可逃".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ing.
Mood: tender, weighty, neither cruel nor kind.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.7. 山鬼候人
使用场景: 山林精怪动画、隐居主题人声 + 器乐
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics channeling the Mountain Spirit (山鬼), a half-divine being who lives among mosses and orchids.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: the spirit waits at a mountain hollow for a human visitor who promised to return, weaves a robe of vines while watching the path.
Refrain rule: 1 plant-or-mist image (vine, moss, fog, pine) + 1 waiting action (weave, listen, lean).
Forbidden phrases: "鬼魅", "凶兽", "幽魂", "妖孽".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ai.
Mood: patient, slightly wild, lonely without bitterness.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.8. 大招招魂
使用场景: 追思剧主题、招魂仪式场面
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics in the spirit of Da Zhao (Great Summons), calling a wandering soul to return home.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a ritual speaker calls a beloved soul back from the four directions, describing the dangers of each direction and the warmth of home.
Refrain rule: 1 direction image (north wind, south sea, east tiger, west desert) + 1 calling action (call by name, light a lamp, lay out food).
Forbidden phrases: "幽冥地府", "永堕轮回", "永不超生".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ai or -ei.
Mood: urgent, tender, pleading without despair.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.9. 渔父歌沧浪
使用场景: 哲思短片、隐士题材原声单曲
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics channeling the dialogue between Qu Yuan and the Fisherman (渔父), in the voice of the fisherman.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a fisherman watches an exiled official refuse to compromise, sings a song about washing one's cap in clear water and one's feet in muddy water, then drifts on.
Refrain rule: 1 water image (current, mud, foam, oar) + 1 detached action (wash, push off, laugh quietly).
Forbidden phrases: "与世为敌", "忠义已死", "孤身独立永世".
Rhyme: end refrains in -u.
Mood: amused, detached, neither preaching nor mocking.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.10. 国殇祭士
使用场景: 战争纪念、战后场面配乐
Write Chuci-flavored lyrics in the spirit of Guo Shang (国殇), honoring soldiers who fell defending the homeland.
Structure: Invocation / Long Verse 1 / Refrain (with 兮) / Long Verse 2 / Refrain / Bridge of Questions / Long Verse 3 / Final Refrain.
Theme: a survivor walks the battlefield after the fight, names what each fallen comrade was carrying, swears to remember without glorifying.
Refrain rule: 1 battlefield image (broken spear, banner, dust, kite) + 1 honoring action (kneel, lay down a coin, speak a name).
Forbidden phrases: "光荣牺牲", "血流成河值得", "英雄不死".
Rhyme: end refrains in -ang.
Mood: heavy, grateful, refuses propaganda.
Length: 8–12 characters per line.容易踩的坑
- 在普通主歌里加几个”兮”就叫楚辞 —— 节拍真的得是长句仪式才行
- 把唐诗的克制和楚辞的野混在一起 —— 两种声音会打架，挑一个
- 漏写禁用词块 —— 模型马上滑回”命运残忍""祖灵哭泣”
- 不指定具体篇章 —— 写出来的是楚辞的整体平均，没有个性
- 用现代动词 —— 楚辞的力量在前现代动词（跪、洒、招、纺）
下一步怎么改得更好
- 先让模型用两句白话把祭祀场景描清楚，再写词
- 钉死哪个神、哪条河、哪一篇 —— 楚辞是一组有名字的篇章，不是一种朦胧氛围
- Suno 标签写”古琴 + 慢仪式鼓，不要旋律性副歌”，更像吟诵不像流行
- “兮”只放在句末，不要塞句中 —— 句中”兮”念出来很假
- 写完后把重句念出来，不像一口气就重写
常见问答 (FAQ)
Q：楚辞必须用文言写吗？
A：不必，但要写出有仪式感的现代中文。动词比名词重要，挑前现代的动词（洒、跪、招）能立刻立起来。
Q：楚辞和唐诗的区别在哪？
A：唐诗克制、城市、个人；楚辞野、近水、巫祭，常常是复数（群祝召一个神）。主题选哪个，先决定。
Q：要不要直接用”魂兮归来”这种现成句？
A：原创歌建议在同样节拍里另写一个重句。直接抄会显得像博物馆陈列。
Q：Suno 能干净地念”兮”吗？
A：普通话版本基本能念出 “xi” 的轻尾音，但偶尔会被吞。可以同 prompt 要一个不带”兮”的备用版本。
Q：楚辞感单曲多长合适？
A：4–5 分钟。长句节拍需要呼吸，3 分钟以下听起来像草稿。